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Post by sandfur on Feb 12, 2010 0:54:05 GMT -5
g e n e r a l
name: Mittens
age: 7 Moons
gender: tom
clan: Crimsonclan
rank:fighter-in-training
a b o u t
weight: 10 pounds
height:29 cm
markings: darker brown spots everywhere
coat: short brown fur
eye color: yellow
personality: He is massive and tall for his age, that's why he trains to be a fighter. He sometimes overreacts, but is all in all very loyal and nice. He is very defensice and trys to protect everyone in his clan.
history: He was born in Crimsonclan. His parents where both hunters, but because of his body he becomes a fighter. His parents took him out for some hunts a few times, so he also learned the basic hunter's crouch. Nevertheless he will be a fighter and he'll does everything to be the best.
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Post by r i d d l e on Feb 12, 2010 7:28:13 GMT -5
the history NEEDS to be at least one WHOLE paragraph. please add at least four more sentences on there. |
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Post by sandfur on Feb 12, 2010 10:57:01 GMT -5
modified
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Post by r i d d l e on Feb 12, 2010 17:57:55 GMT -5
gosh. i don't feel like counting sentences right now... ><
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